My One-On-One with the Editor

I had my one-on-one with Noa Wheeler, editor at Henry Holt Publishing Co. the other week. In a nutshell, she thought "Berries and Bears" had cute pictures and way too much text. It was a 10 minute session and we sorta just stared at each other for the last 8 minutes. Got another one next month. I'm looking for my Wite-Out.